Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 1, 2020
Friyay Tasks
today I picked to do a donuts truck I hope you like it!
please give me some advice and what I could do next time or even if you have made something like this bye.
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Hey Ollie, I'm really looking forward to being able to see all of my friends again too! I'm glad you enjoy your fun Friday tasks, your donut truck is really cool! I like that you found an image if an actual truck and then decorated it, very clever. Have you thought of a cool business name? Remember to proofread your posts, double checking spelling and punctuation. Keep up the great work and enjoy your weekend! Caitlin :)
ReplyDeleteHey Ollie, a donut truck, mmm, yummy, I love the smell of donuts cooking from the food trucks. I have had to try to limit myself eating things like cakes and treats...its so easy to nip into the pantry being at home! Take care when you post to your blog that you are including punctuation, and you are making sire all of your sentences make sense.
ReplyDeleteHello good work keep it up
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That looks super GOOD i can smell it from here
ReplyDeletegood work keep it up o_o
Hi ollie it's Xavier I love how you Say hi to who views you're blog keep up the good WoRK KeEp iT Up
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