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Monday, August 3, 2020

My amazing poem

I literacy we are making sestina poems and we were only allowed to make a 6-word sentence 
This is a poem from a long time ago but I found it fun to make and thought I should make a post about it.
It may be small but it was fun to make maybe you should try

A big shark eating poor fish
 I feel the shark’s bite sting 
 My diving mate was with me 
 I wish I had shark-proof suits 
I went to win a fight

Please give me advice on what I can do next time 

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