Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, February 28, 2020
Kidsline
kids line is the place to go if anybody's being mean to you and you're a kid
it is free. Anyway, this is my poster what do you think of it,
Please tell me in the comments section below.
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Hello Ollie,
ReplyDeleteI think you did pretty good with the poster, I liked how you included the logo and saying important information such as: saying its free and its for children and when i looked at the background i could immediately see that kids line is a New Zealand thing.
One thing that needs some work on is making it brighter. Maybe you could change the background to make it pop out more or change the colour of the text.