Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, March 12, 2019
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Hello Ollie, the volcano sounds really fun. I like how you think it was fun until the tidy up. I think it is cool that you added the ingredients list. maybe you could put some pictures in and add some more results.
ReplyDeleteok but sadly I don't have any pictures of it
ReplyDeletebut thank you for the idea