Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, December 6, 2019
women sports stars should get more money
This im my third post for my learning journey I had to do what is said above I think I did well please comment
yes, women, sports teams should definitely get the same amount of money for playing a sport that men play especially when the black Ferns have wone the world cup 5 times but still don't get as much money as the all blacks
My amazing similes
this im my second post for my learning journey I had to do what is said above I think I did well please comment
I am as fast as a lightning bolt
My uncle is as tall as a giraffe
The kid is as fat as the hippo
I am as skilled as him
He is as fat as Santa
He is as fast as lightning
He is as ugly as the warthog
I am as fast as a lightning bolt
My uncle is as tall as a giraffe
The kid is as fat as the hippo
I am as skilled as him
He is as fat as Santa
He is as fast as lightning
He is as ugly as the warthog
Thursday, December 5, 2019
Friday, November 22, 2019
fabulous reading
In reading, we are given a slide with questions from the book that we're reading I'm reading the battle I am not done yet
Tuesday, November 5, 2019
Friday, October 25, 2019
Myth
this is my writing I decided to make some myths I hope you enjoy if I have any spelling mistakes please tell me
Tuesday, October 22, 2019
Friday, October 18, 2019
The myth of the haunted Forest
In literacy we have been doing short stories on mine I decided it make a myth this my story I hope you like it
cool goals
these are my term 4 goals 2019 in class we did our goals in our class we do a goal ladder with steps going up it on the steps we have steps to succeed in our goal
Thursday, September 26, 2019
why children shouldn't be able to vote
Why children shouldn't be able to vote
Imagine if children were free to vote for who and what they wanted? Do you think this would be a good idea for our country? I don’t and I’m going to tell you my reasons why.
Firstly, some children would obviously just pick a funny name. So, for example, if the name of the candidate was ‘Ben Dover’,
most children would pick that name to be funny but he may not be the best person for the job.
Secondly, they just aren’t old enough and they might just pick their favourite colour of the political party but they wouldn’t even understand what they are voting for.
Finally, they would not know how to vote and they might pick the man who said, “I will give you a lollipop if you vote for me”. Instead, they need to know what they are dealing with and what each candidate is good at and planning to change.
In conclusion, this is why I believe children shouldn’t vote as they just aren’t old enough, they can’t make good decisions or understand what is best for our country. Do you agree?
Friday, August 23, 2019
we shouldn't have to listen to grown-ups
Should children obey adults at all times
NO, we should not have to do what adults say all the time no one would have their own opinion and there would be no policemen or army swat FBI Microsoft all this thing wouldn't exist and the would-be so plain and purrfect bill gates snuck away from class to practice coding and ply with technology if he didn't he might not have got to where he is now everyone has done something wrong and ignored adults even me so when you are an adult just remember that you have done something wrong
In writing we are doing persuasive topics and I decided to do why we shouldn't always have to listen to grown-up I hope you like it
In writing we are doing persuasive topics and I decided to do why we shouldn't always have to listen to grown-up I hope you like it
Friday, August 9, 2019
Building a city with maths!
In maths, we are designing and then building geometry city each time w do more work it will be updated because we haven't finished I think we did well so please give us some more ideas in the comment section down below.
Friday, August 2, 2019
I heard a whisper but no one was there writing
On the 18 of August, I decided to move out of my parent's house so I moved to the other side of the city with jack. The place came with 2 beds 1 toilet and one big kitchen, we thought it was quite grubby and old. When we had finished taking our stuff in it was nearly dark so we had dinner then played some fortnight. After an hour of that, we went to bed.
It was 1 o'clock when I heard a whisper that said why are you here so I raced into Jack's room and found him snoring loudly so I woke him up and said what I heard. Then we heard it again so we went to the sound and found this old lady ghost then she disappeared so we went back to bed.
In the morning we brought some security cameras and placed them around the house along with some ghost traps around the house. Then we played some fortnight later on we went to sleep we heard the ghost say it just wanted to be friendly so we played some games of fortnite with her.
The end
I had to do this in writing once it was really fun you should try it, I hoped you liked you like it
please comment thankyou.
I had to do this in writing once it was really fun you should try it, I hoped you liked you like it
please comment thankyou.
me persuasive writing on literacy
On wet lunches, we should be able to go on our devices because it is something calm to do
And quite on our devices, we can play loads of games some games can also help your learning and reflects
Most lunches will not be an inside lunch so we should be able to take advantage of it
We can't do work, games that will help our learning and fun games
In literacy, we need to do persuasive writing my work is not done yet so
please give me new ideas
In literacy, we need to do persuasive writing my work is not done yet so
please give me new ideas
Thursday, July 4, 2019
Friday, June 28, 2019
writing report
we had to do a report on something related to Nature I decided to do snow leopards because they look cool
Thursday, June 20, 2019
Wednesday, June 5, 2019
Tuesday, May 28, 2019
reading
in reading, we had our code tasks first where to go on to Kiwi kids news and do something surprising
interesting and trouble then we Went on wonderopolis you know where to spend 20 minutes on Spellodrome and then do spelling activities I decided to do proofreading practice
Wednesday, May 22, 2019
Wednesday, May 15, 2019
Thursday, May 9, 2019
Tuesday, May 7, 2019
writing rubric
in writing were doing an informational report and so we made a rubric to help us self check it
Monday, May 6, 2019
book cover
In writing, we had to create a new cover for a novel my choice book was 100 most Indestructible things on the planet
my cover had to be eye-catching
my the blurb information had to be correct
my cover had to suit my novel
Thursday, April 4, 2019
Tuesday, April 2, 2019
Tuesday, March 12, 2019
Tuesday, March 5, 2019
Tuesday, February 26, 2019
School camp
On Thursday we had a full day of activities my favorite was the rifle shooting but it was my last activity. my first activity was an animal game where re-enacted the extinction of native animals in NZ
it was very fun next we had the bouldering wall we felt pretty safe because we had a spotter underneath of us because we didn't have a harness so they could catch us if we fell us played
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